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Research – not always what you expect.

Royal MileIt hasn’t really been a week  for getting much writing done as most of it was spent in the wonderful city of Edinburgh where I combined a day of intensive research with another couple of days of equally intensive sight-seeing. So what if those pesky pandas were taken off show? Everything else  came up trumps including, remarkably the weather.

Of course the one day I had to spend in the National Library of Scotland (lunch-break spent with last week’s blog guest Jane - her book is out now, don’t ya know) was never going to be enough. I had also hoped to spend some time in the City Library finding out more about Victorian Edinburgh but somehow that just didn’t happen. Still, I did get a lot out of my trip and it made me realise there’s more than one purpose (or outcome) to research.

IIMG_4505n the end most of my time was spent studying the letters of D.O. Hill, and although this began as an exercise in establishing facts (who did he write to, when and about what) I realise by the end that since I am after all writing fiction, it wasn’t so much about getting to the truth as finding inspiration, in particular ideas for the kinds of things going on in his life in the years that general histories of photography have ignored. And then there were insights into his  family life, the part played by sisters, cousins and aunts, and the warm relations he maintained with his late wife’s family, in some ways as close to him as his own. So in the end I did learn a lot about Edinburgh in the 1840s and 50s since these primary sources brought home the reality of the extended Victorian family and other aspects of life more vividly than any text book.

 looking towards Fife from Arthur's seat

looking towards Fife from Arthur’s Seat

For instance, who would have thought that travellers routinely walked from Queensferry to Dunfermline? But when I checked the distance it is actually 7 miles. Perfectly walkable. But who would do it now?

Meanwhile -  I may not have mentioned here that I recently had a suprise win in the Southville Writers Flash Fiction contest (my entry’s here) and last night was delighted to accept my prize of a copy  of Jo Reed’s Tyranny of the Blood  and vouchers for a certain online bookstore. Now it’s time to get my head down. As for the book I spotted in the NLS book shop and was too mean to buy. I feel a spot of self-indulgence coming on.

Writing, research, technology

Confessions of an erstwhile librarian

Now that I’ve (re)embarked on my historical and now non-fiction (?)  project, I’m beginning to panic worry about the general disorganisation of my ‘research materials’  by which I mean everything from dog-eared articles and handwritten notes, to things I’ve typed up in Word or grabbed from DNB or Wikipedia. Then there are endless other websites and online resources including blog posts, images, letters and maps. Having collected these in a sporadic fashion for four or five years, will I be able to find what I need when I need it?

When the project was a novel, I was less concerned (just write then check the facts later seemed a reasonable modus operandi) but in the context of non-fiction, I’m also going to need to quote from and cite these sources correctly. Having spent a fair number of years lecturing students on the importance of such matters, (sorry, couldn’t resist the retro clipart) I feel pretty stupid at not having been more systematic in my approach.

Of course rather than attempt a root and branch assessment of what I have, it’s much more fun to look at things which might help do it for me. And if playing with software (like Tweeting and sorting the washing) is a distraction, it could also bring long-term benefits, couldn’t it?

 I’ve been aware for a while that there are tools out there used by fiction writers to help with plotting and general organisation of materials. A dyslexic friend is a huge fan of StoryMill (only for Macs) and there’s also Writers’ Café produced by previous guest Harriet Smart. Having ignored all of these, I heard a friend and confirmed technophobe extolling the merits of Scrivener and it felt like time  to give it a whirl. Said friend has even bought a book on how to use it, but I’m afraid I just went for the free download, and after a quick look at the tutorial (don’t be fooled – the interactivity is limited) jumped straight in.

Let me say this is in no way a complete assessment of Scrivener, more the story so far of how I’ve got on. If you want more detail look elsewhere, or start with this useful comparison by Martha Williams, but to summarise what this package does (quite a lot!) I’d say there are three areas -

  • story  planning and structure,
  • producing  a formatted manuscript,
  • research and notes

Now I am a confirmed user of (and at one time even a trainer in) MS Word and so although Scrivener looks good for outlining and navigating I am happy with Word’s  Document map, or occasionally Outline View. Scrivener has some nice extra features like wordcounts for each section and a pinboard view which I haven’t had cause to use but could be a big plus for a project (like the first draft of a novel?) that’s in a ‘free-form’ state. I also like the flexibility of viewing a document in chunks or in a straight run, and the clever ‘scrivenings’ idea of looking at (and editing) different sections on the same screen. At this point, I can manage with the way I do things now, but might be persuaded to change if there are other advantages.

As regards formatting, Scrivener has its own customisable templates and I imagine the output process is reasonably straightforward, but for me the Word style menu is as good as a security blanket and I’m unwilling to give up the whole gamut of word-processing options presented by Word, or to embark on all of that after I export the text from Scrivener instead of doing it as I go along. I also had a minor panic when I had problems exporting my Scrivener files back into Word. The panic (thanks to a friendly Tweep) is now over, but do I want to spend time learning the Scrivener way what I can do already? So this far, although Scrivener might be dandy for someone who hasn’t got the hang of all the features of Word, I’m not persuaded to give up what I know and learn to do it all a new way.

Scrivener screenshotSo what about research materials? At first sight everything looks good. As well as document text, the Scrivener ‘binder’ lets me import research notes and websites into the interface and lets me work in ‘split screen’ with a research document or website on view as I type. So this is a plus. I have character notes, images and web pages absolutely to hand and can as far as I can see, create as many folders as I would like to store them in. I can also type in notes relating to any particular scene or the project as a whole. On the other hand I don’t seem to be able to drag research items into the notes pane, which would have been helpful e.g. to associate a document or website with a particular scene/chapter.

I think I was really hoping that there might be a facility in Scrivener to store references and produce citations from them, which was maybe optimistic. But I know that most citation software (Refworks, Endnote etc)  has a plug in that runs in Word, enabling citations to be imported as endnotes or footnotes in the desired format and ‘on the fly’. It looks like no one has a plug-in for Scrivener, and that the work-arounds would be fiddly. I’m not planning an academic treatise, but I woudl like to store a modest bibliography and be able to incorporate citations from it.  So, Scrivener scores on structure/planning and in organising research, but not (for me) in formatting or citation management.

Despite these shortcomings, the Scrivener interface is user-friendly and in my case having everything to hand does seem to concentrate the mind. It’s also fun to be embarking on a new project with a new tool. So will I take out a licence when my trial period ends? Right now, on balance, I think the answer is no, but I have a couple of weeks left. Possibly just enough time to change my mind.

If you want to see for yourself, Scrivener is available here as a free trial.

Next task? Yes, I’m playing with a free citation manager, but I think it’s time I did some writing – somewhere, anywhere.

Everyone a winner?

Two years ago I was short-listed for the Winchester Conference short  story prize and this year was a bit  disappointed when my entry didn’t get anywhere. But one nice thing about Winchester  is that every entry (winner or ‘loser’) gets feedback from one of the judges. Mine arrived today and this year it is not in the form of a scoresheet which makes interesting reading in itself.  

My story was scored on nine aspects: opening, title, plot/theme,action/pace, characters, entertainment quotient, dialogue, language and ending. I scored highest on title, plot, action and ending and was above average in everything else, although I was disappointed not to have done better on character and dialogue. But if  138 points out of 230 looks a bit lacklustre (and certainly not amongst the prizes) my anonymous marker described it as ‘an amusing well-paced tale’ and he/she took the trouble to add comments to some of the allocations so that the feedback has a personal touch. I’d also like to think that my score of 20 on the language scale (for “flashes of originality give it an extra sparkle”) is actually what I aimed to achieve, although “smooth and easy to read” would have scored higher!

I think it does help to have this kind of rubric, not just so that  the writer can focus on what might need attention, but also to introduce a degree of uniformity in the response each writer gets. Instinctively I’m against reducing a piece of creative writing (especially my own!) to a tick-box score, but I’m also of the view that writing can be taught, in which case I have to concede it can be assessed.

This week Sarah Duncan puts forward the view that no writing is worthy of publication unless it scores 70% . Sounds good to me, just a shame that  mine is languishing  (searches for calculator) at a mere 60. Still it did get shortlisted here, so not entirely a lost cause!

On a different tack. I’ve just added a new page to the site. Two posts and a page already this week. Possibly a record!

Historical hysterical

Many years ago I heard  a talk by an author (whose name I have sadly forgotten!) who spent years researching every novel to the extent that to get one book right she actually trained as a pilot. While this struck me as very worthy, I felt (and hoped) there must be an easier way to write a book . The obvious answer to follow the precept ‘write what you know’, although this has to be interpreted carefully. Fiction would be a dull old place without fantasy, sci-fi and the exploration of all the wild places of the world (or of the soul) that we don’t encounter every day. Likewise the life of a writer. Imagination, after all, is the name of the game (as a writer friend reminds me here) .

But back to the point. Having launched myself at a historical subject, I’m find myself  in unexpected sympathy with that  pilot author. I do know that in fiction, historical or otherwise,  the story is the thing, and technical or period detail is also secondary to the structure and charcterisation. When my very first heroine bumped up against the sexual mores of  sixteenth century France, I like to think I did just enough groundwork to provide a convincing plot strand without getting too bogged down in the  goings on in Paris of 1654.

But that was then. Right now I’m so much happier  immersing myself in research  (notorious delaying tactic of reluctant novelists) than in devising fiction, that I’ve decided to write a non-fiction article on the topic and see where that goes.  If nothing else this will be a good way of synthesising the knowledge I’ve gained, and maybe afterwards I’ll feel able to lay all the research aside (as recommended by the experts!) and let the story take flight. If it doesn’t find a publisher, it will probably appear before too long on this site, so watch this space. 

Onwards and upwards? If all else fails,  maybe I could train as a pilot.